Bad Dialogue vs Good Dialogue ROUND 3 (Writing Advice)

Explore five new types of bad dialogue and learn how to fix them. Examples from Star Wars, Breaking Bad, Batman, Seinfeld, The Room, Troll 2, and more! Get Brandon's horror/thriller novel BAD PARTS: - AMAZON (USA): - AMAZON (UK): - AMAZON (CAN): - AMAZON (INDIA): - AMAZON (AUS): - BARNES & NOBLE: - AUDIBLE: - OTHER RETAILERS: Get Brandon's supernatural thriller novel ENTRY WOUNDS: - AMAZON (USA): - AMAZON (UK): - AMAZON (CAN): - AMAZON (INDIA): - AMAZON (AUS): - BARNES & NOBLE: - AUDIBLE: - OTHER RETAILERS: Follow Brandon McNulty: WEBSITE (Join my mailing list!) - TWITTER - FACEBOOK - SUBSCRIBE to Writer Brandon McNulty here: DISCLAIMER: Some of my videos and/or descriptions contain affiliate links, which means that if you click on one of the product links, I’ll receive a small commission. This helps support the channel and allows me to continue to make videos like this. This does not affect my review of products. All opinions are my own. Thank you for the support! #WritingAdvice #WritingTips #Writing #author #betterstories #authortube #booktube #authortuber #howtowrite #BrandonMcNulty #WriterBrandonMcNulty #BadParts #WritingCommunity 0:00 Intro 0:25 Good Dialogue 1:24 Good Dialogue Example (Breaking Bad) 2:32 Bad Dialogue 2:45 Forced Comedy (Bathos) 5:18 Info Dump Dialogue 7:43 Cartoonishly Evil Dialogue 10:56 Jarring Change of Subject 13:38 Rushed Emotional Reactions 16:57 Outro ======================================= CHECK OUT MY OTHER VIDEOS: Mastering Scene Structure: Writing Scenes that Flow: 5 Fatal Mistakes that New Writers Make 5 Time-Saving Tips for Writers (And Readers!) 5 Scientific Inaccuracies in Movies, TV, & Books Query Letter Survival Tips The BEST Writing Exercise Out There How to Write a Book Pitch Writing Villains #1 - Start with Your Hero Writing Villains #2 - Goals Writing Villains #3 - Motivation Writing Villains #4 - When to Introduce Your Villain Writing Villains #5 - Plot Points for Villains Writing Villains #6 - Impacting the Hero The Anatomy of Story REVIEW: Save the Cat Writes a Novel REVIEW: =======================================