Translation Dies Irae - Beatrice vs Eleonore Part 1-1

My attempt to translate a battle scene from Dies Irae as a challenge. I’m by no means a professional writer, hopefully, my prose won’t ruin Dies Irae for you. I tried to convey the “nuance” of Masada’s writing as best as I could, so I had to take a couple of liberties with a few passages which wouldn’t make sense in English if translated literally (or would flow like liquid glue xD). Special thanks to GareJei for helping me out with the chants.