helpless and left for dead...

Please rate and comment. I'm thinking about going farther with this idea but I'm not sure how it's gonna all play out.. I was trying to go for a simple video but there are parts that irritate me and there are parts that I love. Kinda confusing, I know but I tried! storyline: -Mufasa sends hyenas to kill his son because he thinks he is an unworthy heir. -Simba gets away by jumping off the cliff and ends up in the desert. -He wanders for days before collapsing, the vultures follow